This game hit way too close to home. Some of the situations were so near to actual experiences I had that I actually began to relive those experiences, which wasn't always a good thing. Anyway, this is a beautiful game and I hope Aaryn continues to make heartfelt games that are likely to send me back into therapy. And like many other commenters here, I created an account just to recommend this game.
heya, first off thanks for posting and extra thanks for taking the time to make an account just to post. those always mean a lot to me so thank you. i'm glad the game touched on experiences that felt real to you--obviously it sucks not all those experiences were good and many of them weren't great in the game either. i like conflict in stories but i think there needs to be a purpose in that and i do like seeing the growth that comes after. i also think some of those uncomfortable moments in game make me personally appreciate the good moments even better. i wish you closure and peace in all experiences and thank you again for reading and just taking time to let me know you enjoyed it <3
I just finished reading straight!?. I am overwhelmed right now. Tears and smiles, heart wrenching and honest. I have never been so effected by a story before, I almost feel like I know these people. I couldn't put it down, I felt myself saying, just one more chapter. I want to thank you Aaryn for this beautiful work of art. I am a Zack and this story made me feel like I too have a chance. Keep writing and sharing your work and again, thank you.
aww, thank you so much. i was honestly pretty overwhelmed by the end myself so you're not alone. i'm glad it was a page turner (mouse clicker...) and it kept you engaged to the last sentence. thanks so much for your energy and for riding this whole emotional rollercoaster with me <3
I went into this game completely blind, and all I can say is WOW!!!
It honestly blew me away. I don’t even have the words to fully describe how powerful the experience was. The way it dives deep into each character’s emotions it was so raw and so real, it left such a lasting impression on me. There’s so much depth and nuance that I wish more VNs explored characters this meaningfully (I honestly had to do some self-reflecting after that...). It’s the kind that stays with you long after you finish it. (Literally speaking as I played this like a week ago and it still feels fresh in my mind) Thank you for creating something I didn't think I needed in life.
I’d do anything to experience it all over again for the first time. To go back and reread it without knowing what’s coming and to feel those emotions hit me raw and unfiltered again. It’s one of those rare stories that makes you wish you could forget it, just so you could read it all over again.
thank you so much for such a beautifully written comment. I'm seriously glad you enjoyed the story. i've read this about 10 times so far and it made me smile every time-- but then i totally forgot to respond, lmao. my bad! but thank you for reading and i really appreciate your post <3
I too created an account just to leave a comment. This game... hits in a way I wasn't expecting. Made me feel things that I have buried. Went into it looking for a fun little game to horn me up, tbh. That quickly changed as I became invested in the characters immediately. They feel SO real. So anyway thank you for creating such a beautiful game. It really needs to get picked up by a movie producer - it is the most perfect love story ever.
thank you so much. it's always amazing when people take the time to make an account just to leave a comment. I seriously appreciate you taking the time to do that. not only did it make me smile but it also helps the project gain traction here. I'm so happy that you enjoyed the story and thanks so much for the kind words <3
Thanks for the response! I thought chapter 7 was the end, then realized there are 10 in the original DL, so I was happy to see more of the story. Do you have a Discord link that works to join? It says 'unable to accept invite' when I try the one above.
Hello, how's it goin Aaryn. I hope you have been doing well and have been continuing to follow your passion. I know you may not remember me but I just wanted to send best wishes as you continue to accomplish your goals. My therapeutic work has benefitted from this story by helping me reflect on myself and consider what my patients may be going through. Again just wanted to say hello and I hope you're still going strong.
heya :) yeah, i'm pretty sure i remember you. i think we nerded out about psych theories and stuff. I'm humbled you'd come back after talking before (i can't remember when it was but probably like a year or two I think). but i appreciate the continued reflection and i'm glad it still holds up to the scrutiny of somebody else with experience in the field. i also appreciate the best wishes and i wish you same as well. i'm sure you're doing good work and the people you work with probably appreciate you, too-- even tho clients/patients don't always say so :)
Thanks and yes im doing my best to keep an open environment and encourage them to consider what they want from their lives. I also remind them to accept their current limitations but never be afraid to grow past them if they are willing to put in the work. So many are already something special but allow social views or expectations to downgrade all they have done to make it this far. Not everyone is meant to climb a mountain but it doesn't mean your achievements are meant to be downplayed when you know how hard you worked. Love yourself. Be proud of who you are. Be patient with yourself. Allow yourself to be vulnerable when you need a moment. Being strong means working through your pain. Not avoiding as if its something to be feared.
Ive followed this story on and off for a few years now and only just saw the ending and i loved it! I so hope Aaryn makes a sequel because he really knows how to tell a story and i am desperate to know what happens between Zack and Braden!
Unlike so many other games, the sexual content is lower, but my god when those scenes come up they're pure perfection! And honestly, I love that the game isn't just about sex but actually is about their relationship around that aspect. I will continue to re-play this game for a long time because I absolutely loved everything about it
Heya, first off thanks for the post and thank you so much for following all these years. i know some people that played the original have put off the ending for a litany of reasons so i'm glad it met your expectations (no spoilers). seriously glad you enjoy the project and i'm grateful that you have the motivation to play it multiple times. i'm not sure what's next after this. my official response has been no sequels unless i can do better than the first time. i dont like when people run a franchise into the ground and people have trusted me with these characters and i take that pretty serious. i have a pretty open mind tho. thanks for the support and thanks for reading <3
Honestly, i feel obsessed with the game, my mind keeps thinking of a potential plot for a sequel (i would imagine it only being one sequel and that being it so you wouldn't run the risk of overdoing it).
I love writing and am an amateur writer (hoping to get published one day) so seeing stories as beautifully written as yours makes my heart sing!
Sorry if this is really forward but if you ever decide on writing a sequel but feel you aren't sure what to do for it and want an outsiders opinion/beta reader/help with an outline or anything let me know! I'd be more than happy to help (and I wouldn't want anything in return for it, being able to help you at all with this amazing story would be enough for me!)
yeah, i've had some ideas but like i said... I'd be careful with it. i'm also not afraid to do something else for a bit to practice new things. more experience opens up more doors that could easily be applied to something like this project universe in the future which could make it even better.
first off, i always get shy around others who write since this is my first time so go easy on me :p but i do want to wish you luck on your own publishing goals. while i've never tried, it sounds like a frustrating process so I hope you're able to find someone to help push your work.
in terms of help writing this story and stuff: i kinda have a crappy weird answer but it's an honest one. the short answer is that I have no idea what i need/want until i need/want it. i dont really plan things in advance so once I start going in a direction, it becomes easy to suddenly realize that i need a certain thing (animation, feedback, research, editing, whatever) and typically there's no planning or notice behind that. even the outlines for each update are only done right before i start writing that specific update. I'll always appreciate help with the project and i'll always be humbled that anyone would be interested in working or helping me with this thing, but I'm also not the greatest at realizing what I need-- i pretty much just go on emotions and instinct with the story and the characters. I'm also ok with a lot of the errors in the story simply because i never wanted it to be perfect. i dont like following rules-- particularly grammar rules (i'm sure you noticed). so i sorta feel like i'm a pain in the ass lmfao <3
Haha, no, honestly im exactly the same! I feel like a newbie writer all the time, all my works are my own private stories for now.
i think the term is pantser/plantser (where you write on the fly/by the seat of your pants, or where you only partially plan Chapters without planning the entire story, I'm more of a plantser so I plan a few chapters ahead when I write. But after reading the ending of your original version, my mind just raced and I could picture what I'd do for the first 3-4 chapters and what I'd do for an overall story and ending (but of course this is your story, not mine so I respect that totally!)
I'm very much a novice myself so I get what you mean there. The offer is always open if you ever want and it is a genuine one. I have a few friends who write, some irl and some online, who ive had as critique partners/beta reading, and thrown ideas with each other, so I doubt I'd consider you a pain in the ass if you ever invited me to help, even if its just to bounce ideas off each other. And yeah, i noticed your unique style with grammar, and thats one of the best parts of the story, it made it feel like actual people talking to each other, not just characters in a story (if that makes sense) 😂
as I said, offer is always open, you don't have to take it, of course, and I wouldn't mind since it's your story and idea and no one else's, but if you ever want some help in any way, I'll be here, and hey, that offer can stand for Straight?! Or any other project you work on because I'd love to see how you as a writer and your style develop in the future. You have a lot of skill and talent!
thank you so much for the kind words. i sincerely appreciate this and i truly appreciate your motivation to help. i'll definitely keep you in mind. right now the focus is the revamp so there's not much planning that's going into it. I've had a few additions to the revamp and expanded sections but (surprise surprise) those weren't really planned and just started to play out while i was working on the CGs.
i'm humbled you appreciate the writing style. i sorta just dramatically ramble sometimes and i think i tend to like darker wording and massive run-on sentences that would probably send my middle school teachers into cardiac arrest. i do think the critiquing part is useful though. i've gotten a lot of great ideas from the community and stuff. if you didn't know, there's a discord if you're into that sorta thing. we used to have massive discussions about each of the updates but that's slowed down with the revamp obviously because the bulk of the original players have already finished the story but there's still a lot of newer people on there-- kinda like a new generation-- many of which haven't finished the story and they're just playing it episodically with the revamp updates. but i do enjoy feedback on there and stuff-- which has caused me to make a few additions every now and then :)
another way at helping the project is just sharing it. following on social media and liking things to help it get more traction, recommending it to others and stuff like that. i've really depended on word-of-mouth because i'm terrible at marketing.
I came across this little gem , and was so positively surprised , great dialogues writing and amazing characters that felt so real ... I normally when playing any Visual Novels just keep skipping through the most of the dialogues, because generally, in the most of VN it is just a sea of boring text to make the VN longer, boring me to death and literally forcing me to keep skipping , with only one interest that keeps me going on ... to see the sex scenes, different outcomes and endings...
BUT WOW, this little gem "Straight ? "Had me absolutely invested into the story and characters left me feeling nostalgic and wanting more ... It was just right amount of everything , and sex scenes were not forced or placed prematurely into the story for the sake of it ! It all felt natural and grounded, I could relate to! Why is this not on steam, this is way better than most of VN on steam I played ... Thank you, Donated 25$ and keep good work, I appreciate you
heya. Thank you so much. i'm glad you enjoy the dialogue. i'm a fan of stories or movies where a lot of things take place in conversation. i think, irl, that's how we get to know people and their backstory-- we don't see it. so we have to learn about people as they develop and i think that development plays out in conversation. the dialogue was also important to me because it tends to argue different sides of why a character is resistant to something and then also hopefully presents an alternative way to think about that. i really wanted to show the actual process that happens there and how to confront false narratives within your head or how to move towards your own view of hapiness and the world-- even if it conflicts with something that you were taught or some type of ideology that was drilled into you.
but thank you so much for reading. also thank you for the generous donation. i depend on those to keep going but i hope you never feel obligated. i never take it for granted and i truly appreciate your kindness. I'm also looking at Steam... it's been on the table for awhile but i wanted the revamp a little more developed but it's getting closer hopefully.
and i appreciate you <3 stay safe out there. take care of the people you love and tell the people around you that you care about them. the world is tense right now and you never know who's struggling.
I wrote a script in Python to allow myself to enjoy this work, it translates all texts into Ukrainian. And if you replace the model, it will translate into any language (with the obligatory replacement of the original fancy fonts with something more common, if your language is not written in Latin)
import re
from transformers import AutoTokenizer, AutoModelForSeq2SeqLM
heya. i'm looking at eventually getting to translations and stuff. i had several volunteers on the discord that were interested in helping out. i just haven't gotten a chance to try and manage it with everything else i'm juggling. i know there's a lot of people out there that have really been interested in reading the story in their own language. the first issue I've had is time but the second one mostly centers around how much slang i write with. it's going to be difficult to try to get that translated and still try and keep my original nonsense :p
hello, to clarify here, i'm going to assume that you're talking about the android port. If you download from this site or from my patreon page, those are safe downloads because I upload them myself. if you find the game on any other site, I can't control if someone has tampered with it. but assuming that you downloaded from here, the android port may ask permission to access pictures on some, but not all devices. It's not accessing your pictures or any of your personal data on your phone, it's asking permission to use pictures in general because the story backgrounds are jpg files (pictures) and because the game needs to access those to actually have graphics, and because you downloaded the game and the game pictures are now technically stored on your phone: it's asking your permission to access the pictures stored in the game data. privacy is a big deal to me so as long as you're using an official version of the game from these sites, you should be safe. if you have further questions about it, i'd be happy to answer those or you can just pop onto our discord page and ask in real time.
the project operates solely on donation. there will never be ads and no data farming or selling of stuff or anything like that. i can't stand that stuff and despise when companies do it to me. the last thing i'd ever do is create something that takes things from people.
Short and sweet... Thank you. Who knew so many people would share such similar experiences. From beginning to end your story is beautifully told and it has made me feel so much better. Also, you can f*** right off with that little "glitch" on the title card at the end. Once again, thank you so much for creating this and I CANNOT wait until you get the revamp done. <3
but thank you so much for playing and for taking the time to reach out and say you enjoyed it. really appreciate the time. we'll see where things go after the revamp :)
I have NEVER had a book hangover so much. There are few books where I relate to the characters so well. I finished it 3 days ago and I still think about the character arcs. I relate so much to Zack and I'm going through his rollercoaster of emotions through his story - omg I was crying more than I'd like to admit. I'm really toying with downloading the v0.21 to finish the story or ride the hangover a bit longer in anticipation for the next update.
You have an amazing gift for storytelling. Thank you for sharing it with us. I can't wait to see what journey you take us on next.
thank you so much for the kind words. I'm glad you're enjoying the story and sorry for the hangover :p I will say there is still a pretty substantial drop in quality in the original compared to the Revamp even if you picked it up from the current update but if you're just looking for the story, it'll get you there. Thank you so much for reading and taking the time to check in and post. i really appreciate the time and energy <3
i am not the type of guy who likes reading visual novels, it just feels cheesy to me. i had this idea that they are just smuts you could read fast thanks to the support of the visuals. i have no idea why i even clicked on this, just a random urge after seeing the cover and the title, expecting nothing but a shallow story which directly leads into meaningless NSFW scenes after a few scenes.
"+hey i am X. i am new to the school.
-hey, i am Y, do you like nasty gay p***?
+sure!"
that was when i found myself 6 hours deep into the story, fully invested in it. mind you it has been years since i have read anything at all.
it is just such a well written story that takes it time and does not rush. it reflects on real life struggles well. the thoughts of Zack were extremely touching to read and relatable. being from a homophobic country and family, I saw myself in Zack, and even more interestingly, found myself craving for such an innocent but also an intense experience. i must say i spend a few days being sad over this craving. who envies pixels and words right? well, the way you used those did that to me.
it has been two weeks and i still think about this story, but i feel happy that i randomly clicked on this. i think it changed something in my brain chemistry. i find myself enjoying small moments of my life rather than speedrunning it. i enjoy small steps in all my relationships and approaching better to disagreements, knowing the other person might have a different perspective of the story. never have i thought a daily ":)" session would lead me to such a touching piece of art.
heya. i'm glad you randomly clicked on it too. i really appreciate this perspective. i know everyone's experience is different-- particularly when you toss in location or cultures-- so it's really hard to write a definitive experience for anyone so i'm glad you could relate. I do think a lot of VNs could be a lot deeper. many do feel pretty flat and stuff and i just have a tendency in life to want to go deeper anyway. i know the slow burn isn't for everyone so i'm glad it hooked you. i'm glad i hooked you in a genre that normally is associated with cringy tropes to just put people into compromising sexual situations. i think things should matter in stories and i think there's power in making people wait for something or characters to really work for something. it just matters more to me then. thank you so much for reading. also, thank you so much for going the extra step just to create an account to leave a comment-- it doesn't go unnoticed and i appreciate it from the bottom of my heart. the world is a mess so stay safe out there, particularly since you're from a homophobic country. appreciate you <3
This is not just a game or a simple NSFW graphic novel. What starts as an interactive story where you click through events quickly turns into a deep, emotional experience that stays with you. This isnt some shallow game meant just to turn you on--it's a story that gets inside your head and evokes feelings you may never have experienced before.
When i first searched for a gay/bi NSFW game, I never expected to stumble upon something this unique. What started as a simple curiosity turned into an emotional journey that had me for hooked for days. This game makes you feel everything--excitement, desire, deep sadness, even tears. It forces you to think about your choices, about yourself, and maybe even about your entire life.
I played both the original version and the revamped edition. Each is unique in its own way. The first release is raw, giving you a direct look into the mind of the writer and his characters, who undergo immense growht in just a few months. The revamped version takes everything to another level. Even if you already played the first game, this new edition will hit you all over again--with even deeper emotions and more refined storytelling. You can truly see how much the writer has evolved, both in his writing style and in his reflection on life itself.
When i talked about this game with friends, i discovered something incredible. A bi friend of mine came out because of this novel. He first told me about 2 years ago, and it was this story that helped him understand and accept himself. When he heard about the revamped version, he was thrilled, but he no longer felt the need to be part of the community--because thanks to this novel, he had already found himself.
And that's the true power of this game: it doesn't just change your perspective--it might just change you life.
As the story wil yell you; Nothing lasts forever.
Big thanks to the creator of this story and I wish lots of love and encouragement for finishing the Revamp.
this was an amazing read and thank you so much for taking the time to leave this comment. to say i'm humbled by such words is an understatement but it made me smile and i want to thank you so much. thanks for taking the story seriously despite the genre. i know an adult game that hits heavy isn't for everyone but i'm grateful for all of those who have enjoyed it. i also would ask that you thank your friend for playing and reading. i'm truly honored to have played even a slight role in his own journey. that's truly remarkable and i don't even know him but i'm proud of him anyway. everyone deserves self-acceptance and peace. but please tell him that i said thank you for reading and for recommending it to you. really glad you shared this. all the best to you both <3
SPOILERS******* Hi! I really really enjoyed this. I downloaded the revamp and played through it in 24 hours or so. Writing is great, characters are relatable. I love both MC's. I do not know, because I am ignorant, but is the "ending" where it says "to be continued" a definite ending or is there more to come? Pardon my dumb question, I just do not know if I downloaded the correct version.
so there's 2 versions. the revamp only goes up to most of chapter 7 right now. it currently "ends" with a "to be continued" screen. that screen simply means i'm still working on the next update. all updates are released episodically so when v16 drops it'll just pick up where v15 left off and finish off chapter 7. There's 10 chapters in the full story.
the original v0.21 version is the full story. it has all 10 chapters and ends with a clear ending. that version, however, is way less quality and is basically the rough draft. the revamp will eventually follow that story with the same ending.
hopefully that helps. if you still have questions, you can certainly ask :)
SPOILERS***** I finished the story and I cannot tell you how happy I am at how it ended, at the same time heart-sick that it is over? *wink*. I would like to help in any way that I can to keep this story going. Too many of these have been abandoned; please, do not let that happen to this. What a beautiful and important story.
thank you so much and i'm glad you enjoyed the ending. i worked hard on that thing to check a lot of boxes. i have no intention of abandoning it. i agree, the majority of these are abandoned but i think that's because people dont realize how much friggen work it is. i'm here for the long haul and hopefully the revamp, once complete, will do the full story justice
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This game hit way too close to home. Some of the situations were so near to actual experiences I had that I actually began to relive those experiences, which wasn't always a good thing. Anyway, this is a beautiful game and I hope Aaryn continues to make heartfelt games that are likely to send me back into therapy. And like many other commenters here, I created an account just to recommend this game.
heya, first off thanks for posting and extra thanks for taking the time to make an account just to post. those always mean a lot to me so thank you. i'm glad the game touched on experiences that felt real to you--obviously it sucks not all those experiences were good and many of them weren't great in the game either. i like conflict in stories but i think there needs to be a purpose in that and i do like seeing the growth that comes after. i also think some of those uncomfortable moments in game make me personally appreciate the good moments even better. i wish you closure and peace in all experiences and thank you again for reading and just taking time to let me know you enjoyed it <3
I just finished reading straight!?. I am overwhelmed right now. Tears and smiles, heart wrenching and honest. I have never been so effected by a story before, I almost feel like I know these people. I couldn't put it down, I felt myself saying, just one more chapter. I want to thank you Aaryn for this beautiful work of art. I am a Zack and this story made me feel like I too have a chance. Keep writing and sharing your work and again, thank you.
aww, thank you so much. i was honestly pretty overwhelmed by the end myself so you're not alone. i'm glad it was a page turner (mouse clicker...) and it kept you engaged to the last sentence. thanks so much for your energy and for riding this whole emotional rollercoaster with me <3
I went into this game completely blind, and all I can say is WOW!!!
It honestly blew me away. I don’t even have the words to fully describe how powerful the experience was. The way it dives deep into each character’s emotions it was so raw and so real, it left such a lasting impression on me. There’s so much depth and nuance that I wish more VNs explored characters this meaningfully (I honestly had to do some self-reflecting after that...). It’s the kind that stays with you long after you finish it. (Literally speaking as I played this like a week ago and it still feels fresh in my mind) Thank you for creating something I didn't think I needed in life.
I’d do anything to experience it all over again for the first time. To go back and reread it without knowing what’s coming and to feel those emotions hit me raw and unfiltered again. It’s one of those rare stories that makes you wish you could forget it, just so you could read it all over again.
thank you so much for such a beautifully written comment. I'm seriously glad you enjoyed the story. i've read this about 10 times so far and it made me smile every time-- but then i totally forgot to respond, lmao. my bad! but thank you for reading and i really appreciate your post <3
I too created an account just to leave a comment. This game... hits in a way I wasn't expecting. Made me feel things that I have buried. Went into it looking for a fun little game to horn me up, tbh. That quickly changed as I became invested in the characters immediately. They feel SO real. So anyway thank you for creating such a beautiful game. It really needs to get picked up by a movie producer - it is the most perfect love story ever.
PS- The Discord link doesn't work for me :(
thank you so much. it's always amazing when people take the time to make an account just to leave a comment. I seriously appreciate you taking the time to do that. not only did it make me smile but it also helps the project gain traction here. I'm so happy that you enjoyed the story and thanks so much for the kind words <3
Thanks for the response! I thought chapter 7 was the end, then realized there are 10 in the original DL, so I was happy to see more of the story. Do you have a Discord link that works to join? It says 'unable to accept invite' when I try the one above.
we've had a few random users have that issue before. we purged some stuff so if you wanna try again, give it a shot :)
Hello, how's it goin Aaryn. I hope you have been doing well and have been continuing to follow your passion. I know you may not remember me but I just wanted to send best wishes as you continue to accomplish your goals. My therapeutic work has benefitted from this story by helping me reflect on myself and consider what my patients may be going through. Again just wanted to say hello and I hope you're still going strong.
heya :) yeah, i'm pretty sure i remember you. i think we nerded out about psych theories and stuff. I'm humbled you'd come back after talking before (i can't remember when it was but probably like a year or two I think). but i appreciate the continued reflection and i'm glad it still holds up to the scrutiny of somebody else with experience in the field. i also appreciate the best wishes and i wish you same as well. i'm sure you're doing good work and the people you work with probably appreciate you, too-- even tho clients/patients don't always say so :)
Thanks and yes im doing my best to keep an open environment and encourage them to consider what they want from their lives. I also remind them to accept their current limitations but never be afraid to grow past them if they are willing to put in the work. So many are already something special but allow social views or expectations to downgrade all they have done to make it this far. Not everyone is meant to climb a mountain but it doesn't mean your achievements are meant to be downplayed when you know how hard you worked. Love yourself. Be proud of who you are. Be patient with yourself. Allow yourself to be vulnerable when you need a moment. Being strong means working through your pain. Not avoiding as if its something to be feared.
Ive followed this story on and off for a few years now and only just saw the ending and i loved it! I so hope Aaryn makes a sequel because he really knows how to tell a story and i am desperate to know what happens between Zack and Braden!
Unlike so many other games, the sexual content is lower, but my god when those scenes come up they're pure perfection! And honestly, I love that the game isn't just about sex but actually is about their relationship around that aspect. I will continue to re-play this game for a long time because I absolutely loved everything about it
Heya, first off thanks for the post and thank you so much for following all these years. i know some people that played the original have put off the ending for a litany of reasons so i'm glad it met your expectations (no spoilers). seriously glad you enjoy the project and i'm grateful that you have the motivation to play it multiple times. i'm not sure what's next after this. my official response has been no sequels unless i can do better than the first time. i dont like when people run a franchise into the ground and people have trusted me with these characters and i take that pretty serious. i have a pretty open mind tho. thanks for the support and thanks for reading <3
Honestly, i feel obsessed with the game, my mind keeps thinking of a potential plot for a sequel (i would imagine it only being one sequel and that being it so you wouldn't run the risk of overdoing it).
I love writing and am an amateur writer (hoping to get published one day) so seeing stories as beautifully written as yours makes my heart sing!
Sorry if this is really forward but if you ever decide on writing a sequel but feel you aren't sure what to do for it and want an outsiders opinion/beta reader/help with an outline or anything let me know! I'd be more than happy to help (and I wouldn't want anything in return for it, being able to help you at all with this amazing story would be enough for me!)
yeah, i've had some ideas but like i said... I'd be careful with it. i'm also not afraid to do something else for a bit to practice new things. more experience opens up more doors that could easily be applied to something like this project universe in the future which could make it even better.
first off, i always get shy around others who write since this is my first time so go easy on me :p but i do want to wish you luck on your own publishing goals. while i've never tried, it sounds like a frustrating process so I hope you're able to find someone to help push your work.
in terms of help writing this story and stuff: i kinda have a crappy weird answer but it's an honest one. the short answer is that I have no idea what i need/want until i need/want it. i dont really plan things in advance so once I start going in a direction, it becomes easy to suddenly realize that i need a certain thing (animation, feedback, research, editing, whatever) and typically there's no planning or notice behind that. even the outlines for each update are only done right before i start writing that specific update. I'll always appreciate help with the project and i'll always be humbled that anyone would be interested in working or helping me with this thing, but I'm also not the greatest at realizing what I need-- i pretty much just go on emotions and instinct with the story and the characters. I'm also ok with a lot of the errors in the story simply because i never wanted it to be perfect. i dont like following rules-- particularly grammar rules (i'm sure you noticed). so i sorta feel like i'm a pain in the ass lmfao <3
Haha, no, honestly im exactly the same! I feel like a newbie writer all the time, all my works are my own private stories for now.
i think the term is pantser/plantser (where you write on the fly/by the seat of your pants, or where you only partially plan Chapters without planning the entire story, I'm more of a plantser so I plan a few chapters ahead when I write. But after reading the ending of your original version, my mind just raced and I could picture what I'd do for the first 3-4 chapters and what I'd do for an overall story and ending (but of course this is your story, not mine so I respect that totally!)
I'm very much a novice myself so I get what you mean there. The offer is always open if you ever want and it is a genuine one. I have a few friends who write, some irl and some online, who ive had as critique partners/beta reading, and thrown ideas with each other, so I doubt I'd consider you a pain in the ass if you ever invited me to help, even if its just to bounce ideas off each other. And yeah, i noticed your unique style with grammar, and thats one of the best parts of the story, it made it feel like actual people talking to each other, not just characters in a story (if that makes sense) 😂
as I said, offer is always open, you don't have to take it, of course, and I wouldn't mind since it's your story and idea and no one else's, but if you ever want some help in any way, I'll be here, and hey, that offer can stand for Straight?! Or any other project you work on because I'd love to see how you as a writer and your style develop in the future. You have a lot of skill and talent!
thank you so much for the kind words. i sincerely appreciate this and i truly appreciate your motivation to help. i'll definitely keep you in mind. right now the focus is the revamp so there's not much planning that's going into it. I've had a few additions to the revamp and expanded sections but (surprise surprise) those weren't really planned and just started to play out while i was working on the CGs.
i'm humbled you appreciate the writing style. i sorta just dramatically ramble sometimes and i think i tend to like darker wording and massive run-on sentences that would probably send my middle school teachers into cardiac arrest. i do think the critiquing part is useful though. i've gotten a lot of great ideas from the community and stuff. if you didn't know, there's a discord if you're into that sorta thing. we used to have massive discussions about each of the updates but that's slowed down with the revamp obviously because the bulk of the original players have already finished the story but there's still a lot of newer people on there-- kinda like a new generation-- many of which haven't finished the story and they're just playing it episodically with the revamp updates. but i do enjoy feedback on there and stuff-- which has caused me to make a few additions every now and then :)
another way at helping the project is just sharing it. following on social media and liking things to help it get more traction, recommending it to others and stuff like that. i've really depended on word-of-mouth because i'm terrible at marketing.
I came across this little gem , and was so positively surprised , great dialogues writing and amazing characters that felt so real ... I normally when playing any Visual Novels just keep skipping through the most of the dialogues, because generally, in the most of VN it is just a sea of boring text to make the VN longer, boring me to death and literally forcing me to keep skipping , with only one interest that keeps me going on ... to see the sex scenes, different outcomes and endings...
BUT WOW, this little gem "Straight ? "Had me absolutely invested into the story and characters left me feeling nostalgic and wanting more ...
It was just right amount of everything , and sex scenes were not forced or placed prematurely into the story for the sake of it !
It all felt natural and grounded, I could relate to!
Why is this not on steam, this is way better than most of VN on steam I played ...
Thank you, Donated 25$ and keep good work, I appreciate you
heya. Thank you so much. i'm glad you enjoy the dialogue. i'm a fan of stories or movies where a lot of things take place in conversation. i think, irl, that's how we get to know people and their backstory-- we don't see it. so we have to learn about people as they develop and i think that development plays out in conversation. the dialogue was also important to me because it tends to argue different sides of why a character is resistant to something and then also hopefully presents an alternative way to think about that. i really wanted to show the actual process that happens there and how to confront false narratives within your head or how to move towards your own view of hapiness and the world-- even if it conflicts with something that you were taught or some type of ideology that was drilled into you.
but thank you so much for reading. also thank you for the generous donation. i depend on those to keep going but i hope you never feel obligated. i never take it for granted and i truly appreciate your kindness. I'm also looking at Steam... it's been on the table for awhile but i wanted the revamp a little more developed but it's getting closer hopefully.
and i appreciate you <3 stay safe out there. take care of the people you love and tell the people around you that you care about them. the world is tense right now and you never know who's struggling.
I wrote a script in Python to allow myself to enjoy this work, it translates all texts into Ukrainian. And if you replace the model, it will translate into any language (with the obligatory replacement of the original fancy fonts with something more common, if your language is not written in Latin)
import re
from transformers import AutoTokenizer, AutoModelForSeq2SeqLM
import sentencepiece
import torch
model_name = "facebook/nllb-200-distilled-600M"
tokenizer = AutoTokenizer.from_pretrained(model_name)
model = AutoModelForSeq2SeqLM.from_pretrained(model_name)
print(model.config)
def is_file_reference(line):
return re.search(r'["\'].*\.(mp3|jpg|png|wav|ogg)["\']', line) is not None
def translate_text(text, src_lang="eng_Latn", tgt_lang="ukr_Cyrl"):
inputs = tokenizer(text, return_tensors="pt", padding=True, truncation=True, max_length=512)
translated_tokens = model.generate(
**inputs,
forced_bos_token_id=tokenizer.lang_code_to_id[tgt_lang]
)
return tokenizer.decode(translated[0], skip_special_tokens=True)
def process_line(line, i):
matches = re.findall(r'(["\'])(.*?)\1', line)
for match in matches:
translated_text = translate_text(re.sub(r'{(?:i|/i|FF3366|/FF3366)}', '', match[1]))
line = line.replace(f'{match[0]}{match[1]}{match[0]}', f'{match[0]}{translated_text}{match[0]}')
print(" " + i + translated_text)
return line
def process_line_(line):
matches = re.findall(r'(["\'])(.*?)\1', line)
for match in matches:
if not is_file_reference(match[1]):
translated_text =translate_text(match[1])
line = line.replace(f'{match[0]}{match[1]}{match[0]}', f'{match[0]}{translated_text}{match[0]}')
line = re.sub(r'{i}(.*?){/i}', lambda m: f"{{i}}{translate_text(m.group(1))}{{/i}}", line)
return line
def translate_script(input_file, output_file):
with open(input_file, "r", encoding="utf-8") as file:
lines = file.readlines()
translated_lines = []
i = 0
for line in lines:
i += 1
if is_file_reference(line):
translated_lines.append(line)
else:
translated_lines.append(process_line(line, i))
with open(output_file, "w", encoding="utf-8") as file:
file.writelines(translated_lines)
# Вказуємо файли для обробки
input_file = "script.rpy"
output_file = "translated_script.rpy"
translate_script(input_file, output_file)
heya. i'm looking at eventually getting to translations and stuff. i had several volunteers on the discord that were interested in helping out. i just haven't gotten a chance to try and manage it with everything else i'm juggling. i know there's a lot of people out there that have really been interested in reading the story in their own language. the first issue I've had is time but the second one mostly centers around how much slang i write with. it's going to be difficult to try to get that translated and still try and keep my original nonsense :p
Idk why this game needs access to all files on my phone to run but quickly deleted it once it kept asking permission.
hello, to clarify here, i'm going to assume that you're talking about the android port. If you download from this site or from my patreon page, those are safe downloads because I upload them myself. if you find the game on any other site, I can't control if someone has tampered with it. but assuming that you downloaded from here, the android port may ask permission to access pictures on some, but not all devices. It's not accessing your pictures or any of your personal data on your phone, it's asking permission to use pictures in general because the story backgrounds are jpg files (pictures) and because the game needs to access those to actually have graphics, and because you downloaded the game and the game pictures are now technically stored on your phone: it's asking your permission to access the pictures stored in the game data. privacy is a big deal to me so as long as you're using an official version of the game from these sites, you should be safe. if you have further questions about it, i'd be happy to answer those or you can just pop onto our discord page and ask in real time.
the project operates solely on donation. there will never be ads and no data farming or selling of stuff or anything like that. i can't stand that stuff and despise when companies do it to me. the last thing i'd ever do is create something that takes things from people.
Short and sweet... Thank you. Who knew so many people would share such similar experiences. From beginning to end your story is beautifully told and it has made me feel so much better. Also, you can f*** right off with that little "glitch" on the title card at the end. Once again, thank you so much for creating this and I CANNOT wait until you get the revamp done. <3
haha, sorry about that glitch. dont hate me :p
but thank you so much for playing and for taking the time to reach out and say you enjoyed it. really appreciate the time. we'll see where things go after the revamp :)
I have NEVER had a book hangover so much. There are few books where I relate to the characters so well. I finished it 3 days ago and I still think about the character arcs. I relate so much to Zack and I'm going through his rollercoaster of emotions through his story - omg I was crying more than I'd like to admit. I'm really toying with downloading the v0.21 to finish the story or ride the hangover a bit longer in anticipation for the next update.
You have an amazing gift for storytelling. Thank you for sharing it with us. I can't wait to see what journey you take us on next.
thank you so much for the kind words. I'm glad you're enjoying the story and sorry for the hangover :p I will say there is still a pretty substantial drop in quality in the original compared to the Revamp even if you picked it up from the current update but if you're just looking for the story, it'll get you there. Thank you so much for reading and taking the time to check in and post. i really appreciate the time and energy <3
i created an account just to comment this.
i am not the type of guy who likes reading visual novels, it just feels cheesy to me. i had this idea that they are just smuts you could read fast thanks to the support of the visuals. i have no idea why i even clicked on this, just a random urge after seeing the cover and the title, expecting nothing but a shallow story which directly leads into meaningless NSFW scenes after a few scenes.
"+hey i am X. i am new to the school.
-hey, i am Y, do you like nasty gay p***?
+sure!"
that was when i found myself 6 hours deep into the story, fully invested in it. mind you it has been years since i have read anything at all.
it is just such a well written story that takes it time and does not rush. it reflects on real life struggles well. the thoughts of Zack were extremely touching to read and relatable. being from a homophobic country and family, I saw myself in Zack, and even more interestingly, found myself craving for such an innocent but also an intense experience. i must say i spend a few days being sad over this craving. who envies pixels and words right? well, the way you used those did that to me.
it has been two weeks and i still think about this story, but i feel happy that i randomly clicked on this. i think it changed something in my brain chemistry. i find myself enjoying small moments of my life rather than speedrunning it. i enjoy small steps in all my relationships and approaching better to disagreements, knowing the other person might have a different perspective of the story. never have i thought a daily ":)" session would lead me to such a touching piece of art.
heya. i'm glad you randomly clicked on it too. i really appreciate this perspective. i know everyone's experience is different-- particularly when you toss in location or cultures-- so it's really hard to write a definitive experience for anyone so i'm glad you could relate. I do think a lot of VNs could be a lot deeper. many do feel pretty flat and stuff and i just have a tendency in life to want to go deeper anyway. i know the slow burn isn't for everyone so i'm glad it hooked you. i'm glad i hooked you in a genre that normally is associated with cringy tropes to just put people into compromising sexual situations. i think things should matter in stories and i think there's power in making people wait for something or characters to really work for something. it just matters more to me then. thank you so much for reading. also, thank you so much for going the extra step just to create an account to leave a comment-- it doesn't go unnoticed and i appreciate it from the bottom of my heart. the world is a mess so stay safe out there, particularly since you're from a homophobic country. appreciate you <3
This is not just a game or a simple NSFW graphic novel. What starts as an interactive story where you click through events quickly turns into a deep, emotional experience that stays with you. This isnt some shallow game meant just to turn you on--it's a story that gets inside your head and evokes feelings you may never have experienced before.
When i first searched for a gay/bi NSFW game, I never expected to stumble upon something this unique. What started as a simple curiosity turned into an emotional journey that had me for hooked for days. This game makes you feel everything--excitement, desire, deep sadness, even tears. It forces you to think about your choices, about yourself, and maybe even about your entire life.
I played both the original version and the revamped edition. Each is unique in its own way. The first release is raw, giving you a direct look into the mind of the writer and his characters, who undergo immense growht in just a few months. The revamped version takes everything to another level. Even if you already played the first game, this new edition will hit you all over again--with even deeper emotions and more refined storytelling. You can truly see how much the writer has evolved, both in his writing style and in his reflection on life itself.
When i talked about this game with friends, i discovered something incredible. A bi friend of mine came out because of this novel. He first told me about 2 years ago, and it was this story that helped him understand and accept himself. When he heard about the revamped version, he was thrilled, but he no longer felt the need to be part of the community--because thanks to this novel, he had already found himself.
And that's the true power of this game: it doesn't just change your perspective--it might just change you life.
As the story wil yell you; Nothing lasts forever.
Big thanks to the creator of this story and I wish lots of love and encouragement for finishing the Revamp.
this was an amazing read and thank you so much for taking the time to leave this comment. to say i'm humbled by such words is an understatement but it made me smile and i want to thank you so much. thanks for taking the story seriously despite the genre. i know an adult game that hits heavy isn't for everyone but i'm grateful for all of those who have enjoyed it. i also would ask that you thank your friend for playing and reading. i'm truly honored to have played even a slight role in his own journey. that's truly remarkable and i don't even know him but i'm proud of him anyway. everyone deserves self-acceptance and peace. but please tell him that i said thank you for reading and for recommending it to you. really glad you shared this. all the best to you both <3
personally i love both version, i dont know why when i first read this i got pretty emotional, jpb well done mate.
heya, thanks a lot. sorry about all the feels. i like the deep dive, i guess :)
thanks for reading <3
SPOILERS******* Hi! I really really enjoyed this. I downloaded the revamp and played through it in 24 hours or so. Writing is great, characters are relatable. I love both MC's. I do not know, because I am ignorant, but is the "ending" where it says "to be continued" a definite ending or is there more to come? Pardon my dumb question, I just do not know if I downloaded the correct version.
heya :)
so there's 2 versions. the revamp only goes up to most of chapter 7 right now. it currently "ends" with a "to be continued" screen. that screen simply means i'm still working on the next update. all updates are released episodically so when v16 drops it'll just pick up where v15 left off and finish off chapter 7. There's 10 chapters in the full story.
the original v0.21 version is the full story. it has all 10 chapters and ends with a clear ending. that version, however, is way less quality and is basically the rough draft. the revamp will eventually follow that story with the same ending.
hopefully that helps. if you still have questions, you can certainly ask :)
Thank you so much!!
np. if you get stuck, just ask. also have a discord server too that i'm on almost daily. if i can't help you, someone else from the community will :)
SPOILERS***** I finished the story and I cannot tell you how happy I am at how it ended, at the same time heart-sick that it is over? *wink*. I would like to help in any way that I can to keep this story going. Too many of these have been abandoned; please, do not let that happen to this. What a beautiful and important story.
thank you so much and i'm glad you enjoyed the ending. i worked hard on that thing to check a lot of boxes. i have no intention of abandoning it. i agree, the majority of these are abandoned but i think that's because people dont realize how much friggen work it is. i'm here for the long haul and hopefully the revamp, once complete, will do the full story justice